[Report This]Date: April 28 2020 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Journeys of Jenn
Ah, so glad I had this bookmarked once I saw it on my timeline! This story was a fantastic and very sexy exploration of Nikki and Andrew's night from the point of view of Nikki's inhabitants. I especially enjoyed the parallel storytelling here as well, the brief, vivid descriptions cutting away to the little civilization batting down the hatches and wearing out the sexual storm frenzy. You grabbed my attention right from the get go with the opening, and kept it going! I admit that while I am more partial to direct interaction or something of the sort, the unaware facet made this story work very well, as it drew the reader (mine at least) how incredibly insignificant they all now were, as if they were literally living in a different world with the time dilation in play.
Very happy to have read this!