[Report This]Date: August 28 2020 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Expansion Possibility
Sorry it took me so long to get to this, considering I'm the one who kept imploring you to write more. You'd think I'd be more on top of things like this.
Anyway those chapters gave me exactly what I was looking for. Some nice and sexy playing around with the tiny one, and Kat reveling in her power. And I like the direction you're eventually going to take it in, with Kat outgrowing Blake and being the most powerful of the two. I hope she doesn't have the same kind of god-complex Heather had in GP. I enjoy it when giantesses enjoy their power, and get turned on by it, but I stop enjoying it when they stop seeing the tinies as people. That's where the gentle giantess lover in me takes over.
Once again I'm not going to tell you how to write your story. Only you can write it as best as it possibly could be, so I won't even try. But I would like to mention something from GP that I absolutely loved that you could possibly include in this story, or maybe not. It's all up to you. My favorite chapter in GP was the one where Ben had a dream that Heather and Jason were mega giants and had sex while using tiny people for pleasure. I love the descriptions in that chapter. Very well done, and hot. If you're ever debating with yourself what kind of fetish material should be included at certain parts as you're writing this, maybe that could be one of them. I'd like to read something like that again.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. It is a gentle story and these two are not living weapons. It'll take a long time to get this one written but I think you'll be mostly satisfied with the direction it goes.
Date: July 13 2020 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Expansion Possibility
'Hope you're enjoying this so far. Lemme know what you think! How crazy do you want this thing to get? Keep it small, keep it intimate or go all out NWO hijinks?'
Why not both? Maybe they could decide to mess with exes and / or have an 'ant farm of people. Realize that day dreaming about killing is different than actually doing it and decide not to... until they get caught shrinking people and the only way out is to get BIG. And then its all in.
I'd like it if they don't develop an adversarial relationship with each other over time and if more time and size were spent on Kat. Goddess Queen of Earth and all she surveys, first of her name. Growth Potential always gave way too much time and size to Jason for my taste.
Author's Response:
Yup, yup, all good ideas right there.
Date: July 13 2020 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Expansion Possibility
Keep it small. But I would love a threesome between the two. With Lucas stuck in the middle. Or him stuck with kat and Blake while they work out. Love this story