Reviews For Breaking the Rules
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Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2020 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

Gotta agree with sandman what a ungrateful person Sona is, not learning a little humility while being saved by Flo not even caring for the humans she killed or will kill. But this might also be the only way Sona knows how to be greatful by making Flo her property she can make sure Flo cant get hurt or die trying to keep her safe but wonder how long that will last or if Sona will learn more from Flo by being together now.

Great writing was hooked, wouldnt mind another chapter if possible.



Author's Response:

Surprised people still read some of my older stuff, but happy to hear you liked it! Yeah, the point here was more or less that the folks like Sona are immature brats. Which makes the size, in my opinion, a bit more just terribly unfair when some brat can just do what she wants.

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