Date: August 14 2020 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Since the site doesn't have a comment section I'm just gonna leave my thoughts here.
First, I did not expect this story to directly address the flaws in the capitalist system and how the wealthy have control over justice. (guillotine Blair? Idk I'd say a hard probably)
Second, fuck Blair. Like actually, fuck that all-knowing, I'm-better-than-you attitude. She saying she wont stand down and wont apologise for actual rape. Nah, she gotta stand the fuck down before she finds out that all humans bleed the same. Can't apologise for shit. But I guess I'm at fault for thinking a stuck up rich girl high off her inheritance could ever feel real empathy. She is soon to be in a shock when she realises that the world is more than rubbing yourself constantly.
Third, Macy literally got herself high off of Blair and now has nothing withput her. You really wonder about why she decided to make everything in her life about Blair.
All this said, this really isn't anything against your story. It's well written and the characters behave exactly like I'd imagine they would in real life. The writing style and the description of emotion are wonderful. I really just wanted to vent about Blair's actions now that the story is taking a turn from the giantess content and into more deep tones about emotions. (Seriously though this is an accurate description on how rich people just get away with anything because they can and I love that people are realizing that)
Date: August 14 2020 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 21: Confrontation
Blair..... you stupid...idiotic....nitwit!
Date: August 01 2020 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 19: What happened?
If Blair was really sorry she would have destroyed the shrink way since daisy has turned back to normal! I mean that guy she made out with saw tiny daisy meaning Blair already risked the invention falling into the wrong hands! She doesn't know that guy well anyway. For all she knows, he could secretly have a micro fetish! Blair needs to destroy the invention to truelly apologize to daisy so no one will go through what she put daisy through!
Date: July 03 2020 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 17: Regret
Amazing chapter! You did an excellent job building up to and creating this profound moment for Blair.
Date: July 03 2020 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 17: Regret
Actions have consequences, who knew? I'm glad she finally got slapped with the reality of what she was doing given how long she ignored her feelings. Not overly sympathetic towards her though.
Date: July 01 2020 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 16: Drunk
A really good story. My initial grade of 9/10 requires an update; this time its a deserving 10/10. It is also (maybe, probably) my favourite story of recent months.
C
Date: June 22 2020 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 16: Drunk
And we are nearly upon it, the moment of truth; where we see if, in the aftermath of this little orgy, Blair truly cares for her or not.
Date: June 11 2020 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
I don't want to tell you how to write your story, but I am very interested in twothings. I would absolutely love to see Luca actually gain the emotional strength to take on Blair, and I so desparately want to see Blair humanized in some way. I think it would be very intersting if Daisy actually died (likely by suicide because Blair is very careful to not kill her) and now Blair has to face the fact that she did that. She straight up drove an orphan to suicide for her pleasure. What I want more than anything is for entitled people like Blair to realise the permanence of their actions.
Date: June 11 2020 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Great stuff. Blair's arc is very refreshing as she becomes more sympathetic over time, as opposed to the usual opposite.
Date: June 04 2020 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Very good story.
Date: May 30 2020 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 12: Homework
Blair is struggling with her feelings. Obviously she likes dominating her, likes the fear response. But she's also obviously enamored with her, is starting to feel guilty about hurting her.
I feel like an epiphany moment is coming. She's going to do something that truly causes Pixie lasting harm, and we'll get to see how she really feels.
Date: May 30 2020 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 12: Homework
This is gonna end bad isn’t it? Is pixie gonna die by Blair’s hands or is she gonna wish she was dead?
Date: May 21 2020 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 10: Cake
One of my favorite stories on this site atm keep up the good work!
Btw does Blair know that Daisy is living in an orphanage?
Date: May 20 2020 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Loving this story. It's clear that Blair does actually care about Daisy, despite everything.
I hope it remains just the two of them though. Three's a crowd after all.
Date: May 16 2020 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 9: Hunger
I wonder what would have happened if it was Pixie to shrink the bully, but destiny is always cruel to the weak
Date: April 26 2020 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
One of the better stories currently in development and despite (or maybe due to?) a simple seting, an endearing one.
Setting aside the homemade shrink ray gun built by a self-taught orphan girl in spare time within a few days (I know the story is not about "how", but rather the event's implications. This kind of deus ex machina is, however, as cliche as they come...) nonsense, the story is actually pretty amazing. The writing is rich yet concise, the characters have true chemistry and the emotions, the tension! You got me hooked.
9/10, as overused plot designs have to carry some negative weight.
Best regards,
C
Date: April 25 2020 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 8: Search
The plot thickens.
Date: April 23 2020 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 7: Broken
Blair is wonderful
Date: April 10 2020 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
This is a pretty unique story so far. I don't often see a dynamic like this where both parties involved have some level of interest in each other, even if it's subconscious to start with. I think the way you're showing it off its pretty accurate given how both Blair and Pixie are acting.
I hope you'll do more sweat play. It's pretty rare to see people try to write it, but for me, that was the best part when it came to later chapters.
I also think that how you started this story off was pretty well thought out. Building up both girls before any shrinking was introduced was a good idea, and it highlights their emotions afterward.
Hopefully, you'll update it again soon. Not a lot of stories on here have been keeping my interest like yours lately.
Date: April 06 2020 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: New situation
Tremendous, Blair just helped her realize her desires.