Date: May 19 2021 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
I really love this story and hopefully it will continue because I want to see what Macy does to Blair.
[Report This]Date: April 01 2021 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Hey will we see Blair's mom. I want to see what her reaction will be when she finds out about their relationship or if she will you the shrink ray! :)
[Report This]Date: October 16 2020 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
I think it would be awesome if Macy figured out what was going on and found Blair only a centimeter tall and played with her for lustful revenge! She could make her play between her toes or climb her soles when she hears about Blair's foot fetish. Another great storyline would be for Daisy to grow Blair back to normal, Macy finds the shrink gun, puts it in reverse to grow herself gigantic, and stomps around the city to find the girls!
Date: August 14 2020 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Since the site doesn't have a comment section I'm just gonna leave my thoughts here.
First, I did not expect this story to directly address the flaws in the capitalist system and how the wealthy have control over justice. (guillotine Blair? Idk I'd say a hard probably)
Second, fuck Blair. Like actually, fuck that all-knowing, I'm-better-than-you attitude. She saying she wont stand down and wont apologise for actual rape. Nah, she gotta stand the fuck down before she finds out that all humans bleed the same. Can't apologise for shit. But I guess I'm at fault for thinking a stuck up rich girl high off her inheritance could ever feel real empathy. She is soon to be in a shock when she realises that the world is more than rubbing yourself constantly.
Third, Macy literally got herself high off of Blair and now has nothing withput her. You really wonder about why she decided to make everything in her life about Blair.
All this said, this really isn't anything against your story. It's well written and the characters behave exactly like I'd imagine they would in real life. The writing style and the description of emotion are wonderful. I really just wanted to vent about Blair's actions now that the story is taking a turn from the giantess content and into more deep tones about emotions. (Seriously though this is an accurate description on how rich people just get away with anything because they can and I love that people are realizing that)
Date: June 11 2020 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
I don't want to tell you how to write your story, but I am very interested in twothings. I would absolutely love to see Luca actually gain the emotional strength to take on Blair, and I so desparately want to see Blair humanized in some way. I think it would be very intersting if Daisy actually died (likely by suicide because Blair is very careful to not kill her) and now Blair has to face the fact that she did that. She straight up drove an orphan to suicide for her pleasure. What I want more than anything is for entitled people like Blair to realise the permanence of their actions.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2020 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Great stuff. Blair's arc is very refreshing as she becomes more sympathetic over time, as opposed to the usual opposite.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2020 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Very good story.
Date: May 20 2020 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Loving this story. It's clear that Blair does actually care about Daisy, despite everything.
I hope it remains just the two of them though. Three's a crowd after all.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2020 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
One of the better stories currently in development and despite (or maybe due to?) a simple seting, an endearing one.
Setting aside the homemade shrink ray gun built by a self-taught orphan girl in spare time within a few days (I know the story is not about "how", but rather the event's implications. This kind of deus ex machina is, however, as cliche as they come...) nonsense, the story is actually pretty amazing. The writing is rich yet concise, the characters have true chemistry and the emotions, the tension! You got me hooked.
9/10, as overused plot designs have to carry some negative weight.
Best regards,
C
[Report This]Date: April 10 2020 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
This is a pretty unique story so far. I don't often see a dynamic like this where both parties involved have some level of interest in each other, even if it's subconscious to start with. I think the way you're showing it off its pretty accurate given how both Blair and Pixie are acting.
I hope you'll do more sweat play. It's pretty rare to see people try to write it, but for me, that was the best part when it came to later chapters.
I also think that how you started this story off was pretty well thought out. Building up both girls before any shrinking was introduced was a good idea, and it highlights their emotions afterward.
Hopefully, you'll update it again soon. Not a lot of stories on here have been keeping my interest like yours lately.
Date: March 02 2020 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
I hope you continue, really good so far :)
[Report This]Date: February 16 2020 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Cant wait for more.
Date: February 15 2020 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
What a great start! I can't wait for more