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Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 17 2008 6:01 PM Title: Prologue

Now, I agree with both of those reviewers. While this stroy does need a little fine-tuning, I do think that the story of a person that continulously growto be very good. However, I do think there should be some consequence, namly by being destroyed by her won hubris, or something lik that, even if the army can't somehow kill her. That's what I think.

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Reviewer: Stylesrj Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2008 2:28 PM Title: Prologue

Who doesen't love a big growsy smashyfest? Two people don't. I think we're tied in number. Two people for and two people against :D

But you can see why there hasn't been a mega story for a while. It just does not work 

Reviewer: freddysixus Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2008 9:34 AM Title: Prologue

Hey man, don't listen to that guy in the first review, this story is awesome!

There hasn't been a good mega story on this site in a long time and who doesn't love a big growy smashfest? 

Keep up the good work dude. 

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