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Reviewer: Ronnie Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2008 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1--Enter Kelly

Then how about not saying anything at all KazumaR1.  Jackass.  Anyway, this is a great story dude, action packed with rich descriptions.  I love the unaware element of it too.  Maybe in your next story you could have some unaware crush (wink wink).

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2008 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 1--Enter Kelly

Interesting start so far, I hope you decide to continue this.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2008 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1--Enter Kelly

Great so far. You're writing style sure sucks you into the story.

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