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Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2020 7:38 PM Title: Returned

Glad to see you are still writing. I am stuck and can't write anything I deem worth, but still reading the stories on the site.

So... we are saying goodbye to Michael? I think he is a dead man, Camilla will just kill him. I wonder how Kerri would react if the teacher never showed up again.

Your writing is as good as always. Thanks and keep up the good work.



Author's Response: Hello again my friend! It’s good to hear from you again. I hope you’re staying safe! I know the feeling of writing things that you’re not crazy about. I’ve got a crapload of stories that I’ve started and just never uploaded because I couldn’t figure out where to go with them. Who knows, maybe I’ll just put them up and let people enjoy them for what their worth, or maybe theyll never see the light of day haha! And Michael.... he’s definitely a liability to Camilla. He knows the truth behind her kind facade, and he could really be a problem for her down the road. It seems like you’ve got a pretty good read on Camilla, so I guess only time will tell how he makes out :) As always I appreciate your reviews and I hope that you find yourself with some sudden inspiration to write!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2020 12:38 AM Title: Returned

Part of me is worried that if Michael grows back to regular size, then he would be risky to Camilla and Kerri. But now that I think about it, if there is any leak or news about Michael going missing, then the girls will shrink him down forever or something.

Ok, glad to see Adam back! Seeing him tormented just makes me smile, especially when he is being dominated. Being taped to that still is just amazing since it feels almost routine now. You mentioned that the stool is right next to the teacher’s desk so maybe Ms. Crowell will use that stool as well.

So it looks like this Kyle guy might get shrunk soon. Then there is Zach from the previous chapter. I don’t know much about either, but Adam seems to know how place already.

Glad to also hear that Ms. Crowell will have her way with someone soon. I hope this includes her taking someone home to be her sex toy. Whoever that will be, I will envy that person. I hope it’s Adam, he already has 4 “X’s” or whatever it was for being absent in the beginning of this story. Perhaps he will get himself in trouble again and earn himself a new kind of detention. ;)

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews Mr. Speedy, it makes me incredibly happy to read your encouraging thoughts and hopes for the story! Yes, I am trying to add in some more characters so that it isn’t just one person getting dominated and I want to try to experiment with different reactions to being shrunken. That being said I have some chapters coming up that are tailor made with your comments in mind. They’re not written yet but I’m pretty much done with the build up to those chapters so I hope I won’t be keeping you waiting much longer. Again thanks for all the support, reviews like yours make it possible to keep going with the story!

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