Reviewer: meereten01 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2020 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 2

Thanks for the update, I like the story.

Seems like Alice is really owning her all-powerful role and lashes out

Easily, maybe a bit too easily. Wouldn't people start to notice that Alice makes many people dissapear? And then if course send more people her way in an attempt to stop her?

Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your feedback! The idea I had in mind was that she was able to get away with what she did because she left no evidence and no "witnesses". Therefore Alice couldn't be traceable to any of the disappearances.