[Report This]Date: December 24 2019 4:23 PM Title: Arrival
Damn, this is better than my request idea. Thank God for more creative people (like you and evel-inc).
I wonder how this Rosh-girlfriend managed to steal a giantess.
And talking a lot to people in text, but then being speechless when meeting in real life is something I can relate too. But let's hope that the protagonist does actually has the conversation skills to not get crushed by his giantess girlfriend too quick.
Thank you for writing and until next time!
Author's Response:
Your idea was no less fun to write than any other :)
He's going to have to do some quick talking to get out of this, but Roshan has a couple verbal tricks up her sleeve, too.
And thank you for reviewing!
Date: December 23 2019 8:36 PM Title: Arrival
I love it.
Question though; didn’t Roshan give the OK on him chatting/role playing online? Her actions seem contracting.
Also, at the end, there’s someone named Mariam mentioned? “Mariam filled the gap with a deep chuckle which resonated throughout our tiny, hand-held vessel.”
But I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
The key phrase is as long as it doesn't interfere in time with her. As we find out later, it does.
Thanks for pointing that out, it hid from two sets of eyes and three passes. I have a character named Mariam and introducing one named Roshan, and they're from the same language so I must have gotten them mixed up.
[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 8:05 PM Title: Arrival
Can't wait to see what happens next. Things are about to get very interesting! And I think the exposition is mixed so well with the dialogue. It all just flows very easy and is a joy to read. Please don't wait too long for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Another chapter will be along shortly, don't worry!