So many names thrown about in that last chapter, it is a bit hard to keep tract of who is whom.

Love your story so far, and am interested to read where it goes.

You asked in a reply to my previous comments if I would be interested "If you want to try to do a co-author thing or a sequel let me know."

First, I have a lot of time constraints, and can NOT commit to a lot of devotion to any story.  Any collaboration would have to take place over an undetermined amount of time I can not commit to.

Second, the subject matter of such a collaboration would have to be determined between us; and most likely be altered as the story progresses.

With this in mind, and with your agreement, such a LONG TERM story would be a nice project to proceed with you.

Go to https://www.deviantart.com/hertoering and write me a message about the type of story you wish to write, including subject matter and participants.

Let's see where any collaboration goes from there.