[Report This]Date: October 30 2023 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see this one is back! Love the concept of it. I really hope you continue it as I’m curious to see how the potential couples content goes.
I could be misremembering but wasn’t there other chapters to this? I’ve revisited it over the years and thought there was some other parts. Regardless I can’t wait for more!
EDIT: Deleted my old review because I accidentally rated it a 5/10 instead of 5/5
[Report This]Date: December 27 2019 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I forgot to leave a rating, and another detail, maybe a more extensive description of Tanya would be nice
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and rating! I plan on doing a chapter from Tanya's perspective- hopefully that will add some description.
She is also based on a IRL girl I knew in College- and the protagonist is based on me.
Date: December 27 2019 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi!, I must say this is an impressive story... I like the fact that Tanya is carefree and cares a little about the city on her massive tit, ir would be a great idea if she would start shrinking even more cities (I'd like to write something from the perspectivee of some of the people on those cities) to moreparts of herbody , until she has a little mankind of her own to master. It's a great job, please keep it up :D
Date: December 16 2019 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice! The only difference I personally would have made, but it is afterall your story, is that the town would be located either deep within Tanyas' cleavage or beneath one of her breasts {where her bras' underwire is under her tits}.
Does the forcefield allow the fragrance of Tanyas' breast, especially her sweat permiate the towns' air? Will Tanya shrink another town for her other tit?
Interested to read where this story goes.
Author's Response:
I like those ideas! It would be hot (both literally and figuratively) to live in a crevice between or beneath one of her boobs, where it would be dark and humid under her domination. Right now the town is located about half way down the inner slope of her titty so she controls our access to light.
I do intend that scents and moisture permeate the forcefield and that will come up in later chapters.
Thank you for your support!