Reviewer: teamvagisil Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07 2019 1:16 PM Title: Getting famous

You've got a talent for this. I really enjoy your writing style and attitude descriptions so far. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much.

Comments like this keep me going;) I do have some other plans for future stories after this

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2019 6:07 PM Title: Natalies new fan

The story is still really interesting. :D if your thinking of other ideas then one that comes to mind is a guy places a request for his city to be shrunken to nano size and trapped in a girls thong string. However when he sees the girl who accepted the request it’s his own mom. What do you think :)

Author's Response:

The next chapter is half done. So it will probably be online today or tomorrow.

Thanks for your review and your suggestion. There will definitly be quit a lot of butt stuff in the near future. As the characters resemble people from my own life I don't think there will be much play between relatives. 

As said before the next maybe 4 - 5 chapters are already planned out but I am glad to get suggestions for the chapters after that

Reviewer: msad99 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2019 5:43 PM Title: Start

The concept is solid and the writing is pretty good.

Can´t wait for, when you put that futanari tag to use though.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

 

Every tag will be used but some of them later in the story as more characters get involed.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2019 6:35 AM Title: Start

I love this story as it cleverly opens story lines to any scenario. My concern is that it may shortchange character development and plot development.   That being said, I really look forward to more! A few ideas...I would love a footplay story where it goes beyond just crushing. Maybe the tiny people in the city fly helicopters up to explore her giant sole and toes before she uses her feet to play with the tiny buildings.  A second is to have a cruise ship scenario while she is taking a bath. It would be like a little bath toy for her. Finally,  I'd love a story where the tiny guy requesting the session doesn't realize until it begins that he knows the girl. Maybe his girlfriend or sister? Just some thoughts!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

 

I am working on chapter 2 and it is almost finished. It will probably be online in a few hours.

The next chapter will be heavily foot related but you can expect a lot of different scenarios than just crushing but at the start crushing will be the main focus because that is what the app is for. 

But soon natalie and the other characters will get creative with its use;)

 

I also have the overall plotlines for 4 characters ready so there will be some parts were the clients meet some familiar faces!

Reviewer: Mark2420 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2019 11:18 PM Title: Start

This is an awesome idea! I liked the first chapter so much I actually made an account so I could leave a review. I'm really excited to see where this story goes, especially with the feet tag. Hoping to see some foot action with one of the "grain of sand" sized cities 😁

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review. I do have a lot of pöans for this story because it's my favorite fantasy. There will be feet content as well as socks and different shoes.

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2019 8:06 PM Title: Start

Very interesting. Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2019 6:25 PM Title: Start

Good start. Looking forward to more wierd and interesting requests.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

 

There will be lots of different scenarios and natalie will get desperate for money so there will be more weird and interesting requests in the future