Date: August 07 2022 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sorry to hear about everything going wrong all at once. I've been there and it can be very frustrating. Anyway, I hope everything is well, or at least better now.
I'm incredibly glad to see this back, it's seriously a great story.
You're good at writing likeable characters, and I find Byron a lot of fun. His interactions with other characters always feel somewhat real and relatable.
Hope to see more!
Date: December 12 2019 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice work! Would really love to see more soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: December 08 2019 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely loving this story- tall bbw/curvy types with smaller men are easily my favorite stories, and you do a top level job laying out those details. If she takes him out for Italian, eats enough for three, and he ends up between those thick thighs, I'm likely to have a new favorite story ever. Could be even better than Slim Chance!
Author's Response:
Blasphamy- nothing will ever be better than Slim Chance.
Thanks for the review!
Date: November 15 2019 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really great stuff. The pacing is just right and you're good with words too. Really hope this continues
Author's Response:
This is my first story after probably 10 years without writing any prose at all. Hopefully I can continue re-learning things that make stories work and improve my writing. The pace isn't getting any faster though, so I'm glad you approve. Thanks for the review!
Date: November 06 2019 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
This looks seriously promising!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!