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Reviewer: Marcus Fenix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2023 7:23 PM Title: Mary and Ken's Rendezvous

This is pretty much the best collection of stories on this website. They are all so varied and the author does a fantastic job writing them.

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2022 5:44 AM Title: Misplaced Punishment

I think this was my favorite chapter of the bunch (thru chapter 21 thus far). I think it would have been even better had she chosen to eat Chase, but that's just my vore fetish side coming out.

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2022 6:03 AM Title: An Exercise in Trust 1

Really enjoying reading this series. In the Exercise in Trust series, I was thinking you might go a different route, with Erin acting out Roger's fantasy in the first chapter and then betraying his trust, possibly voring him in the next chapter. Was surprised to see the route you took - took me off guard a little, but pretty good story there.

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2022 8:24 PM Title: Mark's Match

Always love to see that kind of switch flipped!

Reviewer: Wizalex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2022 10:48 AM Title: Just Try It

Another amazing entry. Very intense and descriptive scenes.

Kay’s character is great and I loved her methods of vengeance on Josh. I would love to be in either his or Sean’s position.

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2022 6:50 AM Title: Hotel Room Mixup

As always the perfect blend of cruelty, sex, and the utter abandonment of sympathy.

Your stories always leave me wanting to read more, to know what would've happened, or what the characters experienced outside of the narrative!

Wonderfully done!

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2022 5:32 AM Title: Cheaters Never Prosper

Absolutely exquisite! Can we hear about Laura's European adventures next!? I'd really like to read about the tapas in a Tiny Tinder world!

Reviewer: tallie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2022 1:22 AM Title: Concerning Family

I don't need to tell you how well-done this is. But this chapter's got a very interesting reformat. Probably works better with the new site layout!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment, but also for telling me about the format thing. It must be something new with the site, I'll try to poke around to see what might be causing that. It's not unreadable but I'd prefer it not look like that.

Reviewer: Spaceguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2022 6:33 PM Title: Concerning Family

Amazing story! You always write such good erotica. I get excited every time I see a new story of yours pop up. I would love to see a part 2 of this story with Lily ending up in Emma's stomach to follow the same fate as her mother. 

Reviewer: TeachersPet Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2021 6:03 AM Title: Mary and Ken's Rendezvous

Hi im a big fan of your work and sometimes it sucks when a new chapter does not come out for ages and i understand why you cant release a new chapter every day but i was thinking instead of having every story be commisioned you can have 1 story that you get to do whatever you want with and that way people will get to see what you can do and it will give you more buissnes and also we get a cool story. if you chose to continue a story im a big fan of chapter 2 but if you start from scratch may i sugest a stepmom or babysiter 

Reviewer: smotherslave101 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2021 10:27 PM Title: Mary and Ken's Rendezvous

Amazing new peice loved it 

Reviewer: Da Boss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2021 12:47 AM Title: Third Wheel No More

Love the new addition!  Hope to see more!

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2021 5:02 AM Title: Tony the Family Toy

Another amazing chapter, youre an amazing writer!

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2021 4:05 AM Title: Mary and Ken's Rendezvous

Hi, love this anthology! I messaged you on patreon about possibly commissioning an entry.

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2020 3:15 AM Title: Mary and Ken's Rendezvous

Just caught up on last couple chapters.  I love these stories.  So well written and such great reads.  The son tricking his mom to be cock vored to death with is girlfriend and having a hack to change peole settings was exciting.  And loved the emergency room take on all these possibilities.  Not everyone is upstanding but there are to be a few exceptions when people don't know what to do after an accident with the app and actually need or want help fixing it.

I would love to see a follow up or sequal to chapter 6: The Bailed Date.  There were some points in the story that weren't closed and could be completed in additional chapters.  After the brother cock vores sister when her date bails, Mom deletes her profile and the app.  Brother knows parents will be looking to see the daughter come upstairs soon.  After the brother retrieved his sister, She finds out her profile and app were deleted and is scared because her partner said deleting the app while you were tiny was the worst thing you could do.  Brother goes to recover her account in app but then realizies he likes the idea of cock voring his sister some more.  Now i know at the end it is left to the reader to guess which way the coin falls for his choices but there are things left unanswered that could make a great read in an addition story to close out.  Such as why is deleting app when using so bad if there is an account recovery option?  Is she stuck at 1/8" tall forever or can she be returned to normal?  If he keeps her tiny and in his testicles what will he tell parents or let them think she just vanished? Or does he use her for a little while more and attempt to recover her info, with or without luck?  Would love to see how you would close these story points out in an additional chapter.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2020 5:59 PM Title: Sleepover Gone Wrong

loved the cruel sisiter

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2020 3:04 PM Title: Mary and Ken's Rendezvous

Very well written

 

I like the idea suggested below about a sorority of girls using the app to collect shrunken people who they collectively play with. Maybe they haze the pledges in some way involving tiny people (forcing them to eat one or put one in their butt or something). 

 

Two other ideas: 

 

1. I'd love to see a girl shrink a guy, with the guy thinking that the plan is that he will be used as a dildo in her pussy, but she shrinks him smaller than he expects. When he says that he is too small to be a dildo, she'd reveal that she was actually looking for a butt plug and shove him in her butt. 

 

2. The other idea I had was that a girl would steal her sister's phone. So maybe like an 18 or 19 year old girl steals her hot 22 year old sister's phone and shrinks a guy for herself through the profile. She might even kidnap her older sister's boyfriend by tricking him into size play over the phone. 

Reviewer: Dustman1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2020 2:25 PM Title: An Exercise in Trust 2

wow, diddnt see that comming, great pair of chapters

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2020 4:08 PM Title: An Exercise in Trust 1

Love the new chapter.  Curious if there will be another part to this storie.  Want to see how the mother helps resolve the situation.  

Reviewer: Reidthemouseboy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2020 9:44 PM Title: Matthew's Match 2

It kind of surprises me that their isn't a chapter about someone being catfished. Another idea would be someone who doesn't use it as a tinder app but to shrink people and give them as gifts to friends. Maybe even a soroity of girls that just see how many they can shrink and capture.



Author's Response:

Stay tuned my friend!

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