Date: November 07 2019 2:06 AM Title: Chapter X-5: In the beginning...
Loved the dollhouse. More with Ms. Trent please.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
For clarification, the Dianne rabaow (flight attendant) isn't the Dianne Trent who is the president. I only realized after i published the story that I happened to use a character with a remarkably similar name. I guess that's inspiration.
Not sure if you were mixed up but i just want to be clear.
The Madam President will be in the story, don't worry, and i'll try to use her last name or refer to her as the president to be clearer.
If enough people are confused by this I might rename Dianne Trabaow (the flight attendant)
Date: November 07 2019 1:57 AM Title: Chapter X-4: In Flight Service - Part 2
I suddenly crave tea or coffee.
Date: November 07 2019 1:55 AM Title: Chapter X-4: In flight service
I'd love to be Diane's pet.
Date: November 07 2019 1:47 AM Title: Chapter X-3: Onto the plane
Loved the water break. That was excellent. Not much sexier than a stewardess outfit. I thought you might have had another little person get caught at the airport.
Later,
Diesel
Date: November 07 2019 1:41 AM Title: Chapter X-2: Through security
Loved the boom.
Later,
Diesel
Date: November 07 2019 1:38 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
What a fabulous beginning. You write very well.
Later,
Diesel
Date: November 06 2019 9:47 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
I just got started reading chapter 2 and duty calls, so I'm not even sure if I can finish reading the rest today.
Anyway... there's a couple of silly typos -- "in media res" makes me go 100% https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IIAdHEwiAy8, sole vs soul, a couple of others that I've forgotten because I was busy reading.
So far the story looks SOLID and well written (or I wouldn't bother reporting the occasional typo :), so unless you f***ed it up in the subsequent chapters, do keep writing!
PS
First story? Really? Good job sir!
Author's Response:
Thanks sir - especially for pointing out grammatical mistakes, it's genuinely appreciated.
And yep, first story. Obviously i've read others like Make America Big Again though ;)
Date: November 05 2019 9:00 PM Title: Chapter X-4: In Flight Service - Part 2
Insole/being trapped in a giantess's high heel is one of my favorite macro scenarios , and to have a whole story dedicated to that is quite the treat. Great stuff so far, can't wait for the next chapter
Date: November 05 2019 2:37 AM Title: Chapter X-4: In flight service
Nice story so far
[Report This]Date: November 04 2019 9:05 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
I can safely say I never expected anyone to actually do anything with Books' and I's little silly setting idea, but color me pleasantly surprised. You did pretty well with this I'd say. I can see a few rough edges here or there, but the concept and execution are both solid. Very nicely done!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really liked your work as well! One of the few giantess stories that managed to stand out in my mind even though i first read it years ago!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2019 12:32 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
You know, I had never actually thought of like an underground railroad when we were brainstorming through Make America Great Again, but definitely makes sense in the context of the world. After all, pretty sure other countries out there might have decided on the not so kinky life haha. You portrayed an aspect of that world pretty damn well. You have my compliments and I'm happy that little world we made could inspire you to write something!
Author's Response:
Hey thanks man. Your work really inspired me and I found it oddly relevant to todays era - the concept fascinated me.
Glad you liked it!