Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2020 10:35 AM Title: Chapter X-23: Sarah's first time

Aww, I was hoping she would play the generous goddess for a while, to see when she would change her mind - too bad it was cut short.

 

Other than that, awesome work as usual.

 

I also believe you're the first author I see who gets a commission starting from his 1st story - congratulations!

 

Author's Response:

Thanks again!

Sarah's had to start somewhere!

Reviewer: carnage Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2020 1:49 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

So I've had this story on my list for a while now and I've finally got around to reading it! And wow, like most stories on my list, I wish I would have started earlier.  The title lead me to beleive that the story would be a simple, predictable, and maybe somewhat boring read. I could not have been more wrong!

Over the past few days I found myself being so engrossed in this. The characters are not 2 dimensional at all; each of the giants have their own distinct personalitly. And it comes out well through their speech and actions. That is a struggle sometimes, and you did it effortlessly. Keep it up!

And I know you're not trying to overtly cram politics into your writing, even if it is somewaht satirical. But I wouldn't worry about that too much. For me, being in the care (or lack thereof) of a giantess that has differing political views than my real world self, is something I find incredibly appealing. I can't quite explain it. But I think there are alot of people that feel that way too. So for that reason, I really like the character of Sarah and I'm really looking forward to the upcoming chatpers that feature her. I haven't quite made it through the story yet. I can only get so far before "losing it", especially with the chapters featuring Kelly.

I have a lot more sotry to read (thankfully), but please keep writing! I'm really looking forward to more from this story as well as other stories you write!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2020 3:04 PM Title: Chapter X-22: Crystal's Crush

Seems like Mark could have lived such a good life in the USA. He's probably contemplating on why he fled at all, while lying firmly under Sarah's feet. Crystal shows so much interest in poor little him.

Thank you for writing and thank you for the quick updates!

Author's Response:

Mark definitel has good reasosns for fleeing, but perhaps he should have just stayed with Tracy.

 

I won't spoil anything, but if i do end up writing as much as i have planned, Mark still has many more labours before his adventure ends.

Reviewer: osok Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2020 1:56 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

A story that continues to capture my interest.

From the first chapter; it was obvious it was the beginning of the end. I wasn’t concerned with the beginning as you’ve shown so far the journey is the point.
Then you’ve introduced the beginning...with such a different feel and focus it’s almost like a different story. I haven’t read them in the order you posted. I read them based on if they’re set in the present or the past.
Diane/Sarah - a fascinating pair of characters. The glimpse you’ve shared about Sarah’s past experiences make me wonder about Dianes as well. The successes and failures of smuggling. And also Sarah and her rise/fall of using/training.

No doubt you’ve a passion and a talent. Thank you for sharing it

Author's Response:

THanks for the words.

 

The story is evolving somewhat naturally, so sorry for bouncing around in the timeline.  I've come to enjoy it this way because it allows me to mix things up, and keep the writing interesting.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2019 3:13 PM Title: Chapter X-20: The Meeting: Goodbyes

Oh, so there is still some more left in this evening. I wonder if Mark will be stolen.

Thank you for writing, keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Tinywulf Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2019 11:02 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Wow, chapter 17 and 19 were AMAZING

I have a crush on Sarah right now!

 

Soles are amazing

 

Author's Response:

Glad you like it!

 

Let me know what else perks your interest

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2019 10:13 AM Title: Chapter X-19: Insert Orientation

OMFG, love her attitude AND her teaching skills -- hopefully Dianne will notice how much he has learned next time she sees him :D

Reviewer: Lexander Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2019 12:29 AM Title: Chapter X-18: The Meeting-The Party 3: Momma's baby boy

So I have had my eye on this story for a while now but had not taken the time to start reading it. I know I was going to like it by skimming it back then, but I could of never guess just how fantastic this story was going to be. Every portion of this story is engaging and entertaining while also being fluid. I never really know what's going to happen but whatever does feels completely natural. The number one thing I like about the Giantess fetish is inshoe entrapment and foot odor/musk. Making authors like FTfeet, Sheograth10 and duck12345 some of my favorites. You now being my latest favorite. 

I completely love every bit of him with Dianne and inside her shoe. I can't wait to see what happens with her and Sarah in that story arc. The Party in the backstory has been very entertaining so far. Linh's shoe hiding game being awesome, especially with him ending up is Stephanie's nasty grimy smelly sneakers.

I do think it would be awesome to see him trapped in one of Kelly's gym/workout shoes with her massive feet, while she goes out to work on that body he fell in love with. Maybe on the same day of the foot wedding if you follow through on his engagement. :) I do hope that Jen makes her way into the backstory with her name being teased throughout this story.

I look forward to seeing more of your incredible writing kenny224

Sincerely,

Lexander

 

Author's Response:

Hey Lexander!

Thanks! Being compared to other authors does mean a lot, i've definitely read some of their works and were certainly inspired by them.

 

In regards to Kelly, i'm not entirely sure, but i do have a loose ideas of her, so she's definitely still one of the major characters in the story.  What exactly will happen, I'm almost as uncertain as you.

 

In regards to Jen/Tracy.  I'm not quite sure.  To be honest, I had originally planned for both of these characters to be more or less frames of reference for Mark.  Both will be heavily discussed as an influence on our protaganist, giving him motivations and fears, but in some ways i feel like introducing them might take away from the some of the mythology and power of the character - kind of like Oz.

 

So at this point, i'm not leaning towards them both not really making an appearance in the story.  Especially Jen.  Perhaps I'll write an alternate story short story just for her, but that's a ways away, and hopefully, the story is compelling enough without her.

Anyway, feedback is welcome.  I appreciate it, thanks!

Reviewer: bendystraw Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2019 9:42 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

really enjoy your storey.  i like how mark is unable to control himself and he is unhappy with what is happening

i think its a lot more interesting then if he enjoys it

Reviewer: LittleRomance Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2019 1:47 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Oh please let him survive all this shit So he can get Back to Tracy!

I love their relationship.

Author's Response:

hey little romance!

 

I can't promise anything, but i will say Mark has many more labors yet to come.  

I'm writing this kind of naturally and don't really have any kind of overall plot mapped out.  I have some ideas for future chapters and the arc, but many of these have already been modified or entirely scrapped for different plots as i find the natural development of the story dictating whats happening.

 

Stay tuned!