Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2019 3:44 AM Title: There’s no escape from Conqueror Kelly!

Ruining their wiring was cool. Having another Giantess is always fun. Will they go after the ship? I loved her bringing the jar with her to capture the little people. I imagine their fear as Kelly comes walking up. You should use more details when you describe things. For example, Kelly reached down for the tiny man. Her enormous hand blocked out the sun as it hovered above his minuscule frame. He raised his arms in a futile attempt to ward off his fate. Noooooo he screamed, leave me alone as Kelly slowly reached her Giantess hand down and plucked the helpless man off the ground. Just a helpful thought.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

I didn't add too much description because I plan on making this into a comic at deviant art.