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Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2019 10:32 AM Title: Relapse

Very intrigguing. I can't quite pin out Jessica intention and real personalitty. If it was just for the grades and letter, most of what she is doing is unnecessary. And she keeps bringing up the idea that Mr. Thompson is attracted to her her in a romantic/sexual way, while her own unnecessary actions are the ones really reflecting such attraction.

Seeing how everything played out so far, I don't think you planned Jessica to just be a sidistic evil torturer. For some reason she wants to get close to Mr. Thompson, a character that supposedly did nothing but annoy her. This promisses a very interesting dinamic and I am really curious to see where this is going, specially now that we will probably get to know more about Jessica ability and family.

Really good story with superb writing. Thank you for sharing it with us. Any idea when the next chapter might be up? I am dying here to know what happens next XDD



Author's Response:

Jessica's a real tough nut to crack, isn't she?  She's the girl that every guy wants and she knows it.  Could be she's a little hot for teacher, could be she's just fucking with him.  She's definitely got a mean streak, though.

 

Thank you!  The next chapter will be up later today, then there are two more after that.

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