[Report This]Date: September 25 2019 12:05 PM Title: Probation
Nice story. Seems like Jessica stole his heart and then crushed it. Such a pity he didn't move to college with her, but oh well.
Thank you for writing! It's good to see a story by you again.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was wondering when you'd show up.
Alas, the star-crossed love between a man and the woman who shrinks him to extort favors is doomed to end tragically.
Date: September 23 2019 2:45 PM Title: Probation
Love this giantess! She’s playfully fun and just a tiny bit cruel. So much fun to read! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! That's my favorite kind of giantess, so most of them are like that.
[Report This]Date: September 23 2019 6:20 AM Title: Probation
I love all the imagery in this, and in your other stories. Even in bits that aren't my thing, there's something to like in the writing. Like the line about the inside of the Ugg boot looking like a well decorated in the 70s.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I try to make my descriptions as vivid as possible, so that people can feel like they're really "there" and help them imagine it.
Date: September 21 2019 3:02 PM Title: Probation
Great story.
Any time a story has that initial shrunken recognition, I get chills. This guy looking up, realizing dawning on him, it just takes me there, you know?
I also really appreciate that he isn't perverted. This isn't some guy stammering about foot worship, this isn't him going, 'Boy oh boy, I wish that beautiful girl would give me attention.'
It's a someone not wanting this to happen, but having to deal with the consequences anyways.
Great writing! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I really appreciate it! If you like that aspect, you should check out my other stories, and that's not just shameless self-promotion. The vast majority of them are about someone shrinking despite no desire to and having to deal with it.
I also really like the first few moments after the guy shrinks, looks up, and realizes what he's in now. It's a powerful moment, and a good opportunity to flex your ability to describe just how enormous and powerful she is compared to you now. That's why most of my protagonists start out normal-sized and then get shrunk, it's an opportunity to write that scene, and give a sense of the initial confusion of suddenly being tiny.
Thanks for reading!
Date: September 21 2019 2:41 PM Title: Probation
Really enjoying the story so far! I echo the butt comment, she seems like she would really play it up. Do you know if there will be insertion? Whether it be the butt or her swallowing him? Either way, keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
The story's already written, and I don't think there'll be quite enough butt stuff for you, but I hope that doesn't deter you from reading further! I appreciate every view and review that I get.
Date: September 20 2019 10:33 PM Title: Probation
First of all, I just want to say loved every second reading this story! I do hope you continue it and eventually see Jessica do more with her teacher.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Jessica isn't done with her teacher yet, there are more things she'll need before the year's out, and she knows just how to get them.
Date: September 20 2019 12:39 AM Title: Probation
Loving this story so far. Looking forward to more sensory details and hoping to see Jessica use her sweaty feet to teach him a lesson.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the encouragement! I can assure you, you'll get at least some of what you're after with this story.
Date: September 19 2019 10:37 AM Title: Probation
Love Jessica. She gave him a chance by only reducing him to 4 feet. He stupidly refused. Now he's bug sized. I'd love to be engulfed in her pretty hand. What a fun story so far. Hope he changes her grade and then she reduces him again and drops him in an aquarium with small lizards in her science class.
Author's Response:
Jessica definitely has some plans for him, don't worry.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2019 5:13 PM Title: Probation
Great stuff.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: September 18 2019 3:03 PM Title: Probation
Great start, can't wait to see where it leads!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's going places, I assure you.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2019 2:54 PM Title: Probation
Great start! Looking forward to some butt related content!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It'll be a bit, butt it'll come.