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Reviewer: Stylesrj Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2008 2:52 PM Title: Get it on

I haven't posted a new story here ever since the domain move, so I wouldn't know just yet.

Did they change how stories are written during the shift? 



Author's Response: Not really. It just seems that every paragraph that i put into my story is removed when I put it in. Then I am left going back over the story and correcting for this error. I realize that my tardyness in doing this makes for trouble reading a story. Thank you for keeping me from getting complacent Stylesrj

Reviewer: Stylesrj Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2008 9:33 PM Title: Get it on

This chapter needs spaces between paragraphs.

It was quite hard to read 



Author's Response: You know, it's weird. No matter what I do before I add the chapter, the site always seems to delete any space between paragraphs so I'm left with a whole story to go through or you, the reader, must deal with the wall of words. Does this ever happen to you?

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