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Reviewer: Amista6 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2019 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 3: "The Day the Klown Kried"

I loved how she tricked him and I loved the ending for his final fate.  I'm surprised you havent got more reviews, since becoming a buttplug isnt common in stories but highly sought after.

I like the idea of those villians because you don't hear much about them.  there's multiple versions of them too so that leaves you some choices. arrowverse, DC animated universe, comics, movies...

A few ideas.

Batgirl could find him and try to help him. she brings him back to her room or personal batcave and keeps him in a fish tank or hamster cage etc for his safety. eventually she realizes theres no cure and offers to take care of him.  becuase of her character it could be hard to make her move beyond gentle, but they could fall in love and eventually become sexual partners or maybe he offers to massage her after a hard day of work?  Batgirl could enjoy backrubs or footrubs after her dayjob or a night in those batboots.  After months or years she might accidentally stop viewing him as a person and instead a loving pet.  theres also the unaware option of falling into her ass, breasts or pussy.  same for supergirl, black canary or any other hero.

Lois lane could at first be more interested in getting a news story, so she interogates him before helping, delaying as long as possible. maybe she gives him to her sister lucy lane, who is sometimes in the military. or to cat grant?

there are also hero/vigilantes that cross the line like huntress and  wonder woman has killed at least once before but only because she had to.

Talia al ghul would be merciless.  Lena Luthor could go a lot of different ways.

No matter what you come up with I'll be sure to read it!



Author's Response:

Thanks again for reading and reviewing! Wanted to add it in the last response, but couldn't edit it - but yes, I definitely wanted Harley to behave in that manner for the story. There are aware giantesses, and there are unaware giantesses. I wanted Harley somewhere in between, which to me meant a neglectful giantess - but in a playful way! I'm glad you enjoyed the ending to it, as well. I was worried it might get some hate from readers because Harley starts one way, then goes to another, and then another. However, to me, that's Harley. Keeps you guessing, but she has a method to her madness. She's not stupid, but she's alright with you thinking she is, as it disarms you. 

The Batgirl idea sounds great, but it's also something I did in the "Giantess Raven GF" story. Except, instead of Batgirl, it's Raven (of course). She finds a shrunken guy, tries to reverse the effects, continuously failing. They grow closer, and he basically becomes a familiar to her, and then something more. When I end up including heroes in this specific storyline, and I do want to include them, they would almost assuredly be gentle or unaware. There may be exceptions, like Huntress as you said, but by and large (heh) they'll either be gentle or unaware. Lois Lane would be interesting, and Talia would definitely get up to some interesting hijinks.

At the moment I know what I want the Gotham City Sirens to end up doing, but I don't know where I want the story to go beyond that initial setting change.

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2019 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 3: "The Day the Klown Kried"

Don't have an easy way to respond, so just going to leave another review. 

 

Definitely like the idea of Killer Frost! Livewire would be fine, Copperhead is a little obscure for me personally but would still read it for sure. 

 

On the hero front, I could imagine a situation where Harley or Ivy caught Batgirl, and tied her to a chair, but before doing so dropped a tiny guy on the seat. Maybe they did this while she was unconscious so she feels him when she wakes up and has to be told what it is she is sitting on. She would believe Harley was lying until she saw Harley pull out and eat a tiny person herself, then realize that the more she struggled in her seat the more she was beating on the tiny man turned seat cushion. Then when she escapes or is saved she could find him and be gentle. Maybe it's even someone Batgirl happens to go to high school / college with. 

 

Anyway, just an idea, because I'm excited at the prospect of what you could pull off with heroes as well. Loving the stories so far though,so anything more would be great. 



Author's Response:

Killer Frost I definitely want in because, well, Popsicle tinies. Livewire I'm not sure what to do with her power in relation to tinies, but I definitely want someone with her personality in my works. Copperhead I want in because she's a hottie with a body and a snake theme. That's just a free in for vore right there, lol.

I think I could cook up some fun scenarios involving Harey/Ivy tricking Batgirl into sitting on and/or eating a tiny. Like put one in a dissolving capsule, force her to swallow without knowing what it was, then all of a sudden she feels a tickle in her stomach. Haven't put much thought into, but that's the first thing that comes to mind. Your idea of having her unknowingly sit on a tiny while tied to a chair would be really good, too. I especially like the idea of Batgirl having to care for a tiny, but recognizing him as someone from school. She would then have to operate under the assumption that he could one day be regrown, and if so then she has to protect her identity from him - while still having him under her care. A neat dynamic.

I don't want to throw any heroes at it too soon, though. Only because the more heroes are aware of the situation, the sooner they would be able to shut it down.

Right now, the plan going forward is to not focus on the DC-Licious stuff, but instead focus on Overwatch as well as an OC series I'm working. I've scripted some chapters and done some worldbuilding. Now I just need to think of a good look for the main character, an ice giantess, and I'll be set to start!

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