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Reviewer: vicgiantessadmirer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2020 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

So: https://i.kinja-img.com/gawker-media/image/upload/kqcl5l4c26mj4s7lnreu.jpg


Also, It is interesting to note that the human mind is NOT capable of limits. I mean, We have the Planck Length, the smallest unit of measurement possible, but the human mind, while accepting that, just asks itself: "And if you go smaller?" Nice story idea.

Reviewer: Trap Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2020 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just got sent this by a friend - it's a really awesome glimpse into infinity from below. Makes me wonder about all the universes Susan and Micah are just idling close to!

The jumps into fantasy were nice, too - I usually expect sci-fi aliens with this, which is fine, but it's interesting thinking about princesses and fairies existing at super scale. Maybe some of our art was inspired, subconsciously, by movements and people in the worlds far outside our universe...

Reviewer: Peterdivine Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2019 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

This short story is so hot I don't even know if it's healthy for me to have discovered it. It's literally the most extreme version of every unaware domination fantasy imaginable, all at once. And it's mind-blowing.

 

To think that Romeo was arrogant enough to want to be a glove upon Juliet's cheek. How would he react to discovering he was infinitely less than even one of her atoms?



Author's Response: Haha thanks, glad you loved it ^^ Might make more stuff like this in the future

Reviewer: Quicksilver Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2019 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Trippy!  I've thought about this idea a lot myself, and I've seen it explored elsewhere occasionally, but I'm not sure I've ever seen it described to this many levels!  I was curious how many levels in total, and felt compelled to write down where our universe resides in the next universe, and where each successive universe resides in the one that comes after it:

 

  1. Sock of a lounging girl

  2. Pebble in a runner’s shoe

  3. Water droplet on a diver’s skin

  4. Hair of a cyclist

  5. Sand grain in a sunbather’s navel

  6. Smartphone of a selfie taker

  7. Bedroom of an amorous couple

  8. Fingertip of a trainee witch

  9. Hand of a sword-wielding knight

  10. Sweat stain on a teacher’s sandal

  11. Mud on a student archaeologist’s skin

  12. Ash of a first-time smoker’s cigarette

  13. A princess’s bubble bath

  14. Bottle on a fairy’s shelf

  15. Hand of a girl waking up from bed

  16. Deodorant applied to a soccer player

  17. College girl’s cider-scented hiccup 

 

17 universes!  I'm kind of curious why Susan and Micah are so distraught by this notion.  Frankly, the fact that "it doesn't end" helps show that we and those college girls drinking cider are complete equals in the grand scheme of things, as we're all infinitely small.  And, of course, this also suggests that we're infinitely big as well, since, unbeknownst to Susan, as her eyes well up at the end, there's a universe caught in a tear rolling down her face....



Author's Response: Good point ^^ and I didn't even realise it was 17, I just kept going until I didn't feel like writing anymore haha. I could do another in the future I guess, maybe even with your help cos you seem interested in it :)

Reviewer: Questathana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2019 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this!



Author's Response: Thanks ^^

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