Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2020 6:50 PM Title: Part VIII

I love Sierra and Duval's relationship. It feels real that a tiny and a kind normal could get on this way, especially after all they've been through. Excited about the conference. So many possibilities, my brain's been exploding.

Could Duval sneak Sierra on her person? A necklace with a special pendant or locket so Duval could keep Sierra close at all times and Sierra can experience being out and about with no one the wiser? Or would Sierra be stuck in the vault?

Could their relationship flourish in the privacy of a hotel room? Body exploration? Sex...like activities? Bathing together? Boob climbing?

Could a rich, sexy investor lady hit on Duval and Sierra say yes please for 2 giants, 1 tiny Sierra? Or sexy investor lady could ask to be shrunk down for the experience of 2 tinies 1 giant Duval? Porque no las dos?

Love it! Can't wait to see the future.

Reviewer: Concordant Opposition Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2019 1:49 AM Title: Part I

I've been enjoying this story a lot. The prose is excellent, capturing both the realities of extreme size difference as well as the emotions of the characters without getting bogged down in complex description or exposition.

You've done a great job with the characters as well. Very willing or obsessive tinies that have the size fetish themselves are a bit of a cliche, but Sierra is a genuine and sympathetic character. Your skill in conveying her obsession is a large part of this. However, the choice to focus on Sierra's fascination with Duval in terms of pure size and power instead of in terms of the size and power of her feet/breasts/butt/etc is interesting and in my opinion effective. Her desire to seek even the barest platonic attention from the towering scientist seems a realistic reaction to the desire she's experiencing, which comes from emotion as much as physical lust. The glove scene also adds to this theme, as a disposable lab glove is not high on the list of female attire that one might be aroused by, but for Sierra it works nonetheless.

The overseer is also a well executed character. It's clear that she is a kind and responsible woman, but she is not the idealized angelic, maternal savior that features in many gentle giantess stories. She is a more down-to-earth character and all the more nuanced for it. I'm excited to see how her relationship with Sierra develops as the story goes on.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2019 1:23 PM Title: Part IV

Thank you for writing this gentle and kind story. A very welcome change.
I think this type of story is my favorite genre, that being a tiny community of willing participants being shrunken and cared for/overseen by an attractive mature woman. Also their size and the fact that they have normal amenities in this community adds to my personal preferences and frankly everything else is just gravy.
I too would like to see you continue the story of these characters but I'm just glad you wrote what you did.

aaron
PS IF you decide to continue I think giving her office a power outage would be a neat experience just for us(the readers) to see how the community and Duvall would react, cause maybe it could get hotter than normal in their tank(or whatever it is) and would get very humid. So perhaps she would have to take a vote with them on what to do and maybe her apartment/house? However, if you chose to continue I'd mainly like to see Duvall's character developed more.
Again thanks for writing and please don't take offense to my suggestion because that was not my intent.

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2019 1:40 AM Title: Part I

Outstanding. Pace is leaving me anticipating a lot. Will be interesting how you lead into some things. Can't wait.

Reviewer: Saf Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2019 2:27 AM Title: Part I

Very cute. Eager to see more! :)