Reviews For The Malfunction
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Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2019 6:30 AM Title: A Mother Scorned

Great chapter, curious to see what will happen with that mom since she’s in a pretty dangerous position. Looks like Micah’s got some secret he’s keeping from everyone else. Also I realized his mom is wearing a skirt not pants so I guess my idea would need to be modified lol

Author's Response:

Yeahhh I've been light on description to allow better use of the imagination, though I guess the clothes are something I should be more cognizant of for the giant characters. Still though, appreciate the feedback!

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 17 2019 8:14 PM Title: A Mother Scorned

very well written



Author's Response:

Appreciate it!

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