[Report This]Date: December 03 2019 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
All in all a nice story only two points that dissapointed.
1. How in Jesus name did Kayleigh manage to become a star Lawyer with such extreme memory problems? I mean the result that she becomes unware of the tiny repeatly is nice really but i hardly can take her serious in any kind of job that is not fully muscle focused.
2. Its clear that you are a foot lover yourself and thats pretty fine.. but it kind of sucks when i browse for butt tagged stories and after ages.. when finaly some butt action starts its even shorter than the vore stuff. Seriously if the foot lover here only use the butt tag to lure people into their story to then include some half assed 1 percent of the story butt action it kind of pisses me off. Sorry.. simply dont add any butt action and remove the dag and be happy with your foot stuff.
Author's Response:
I'll try to address both points, since I think they do carry some weight to them.
1) For Kayleigh's forgetfulness, I mainly did that because I thought the interactions would be more fun if she forgot about the protagonist partway through the day. Though in the story I do stress that she regularly uses and shrinks dummies, so if she was busy with important work, she might likely forget that she swapped a fake dummy for a real person. And since she's doing prep work for a trial, she'll end up being more drained and likely for other things to slip her mind.
2) For the tags in general, I think you make a good point there too. I'll sort that out.
That being said, I don't think it's at all appropriate for you to tell an author what they should or should not add to their story. There's a difference between giving criticism and ordering an author around. If I want to add a bit of butt interaction, then I will. I didn't intend to 'lure' anyone based on the tags, I just didn't take everything into consideration when adding it.
Regardless of that, have a nice day.