[Report This]Date: July 16 2019 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad he stayed with Kayleigh, but the thought of Taylor using him without knowing he's real is very enticing (looking forward to that chapter one day!). Enjoyed the crotch play - definitely don't shy away from that.
Keep up the great work, loving the unaware stuff and looking forward to see how this all progresses.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
And I'm looking forward to eventually writing that bonus for Taylor. Regardless of how aware/unaware I focus it, it should be a fun addition. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Take care!
Date: July 15 2019 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Taylor did sound enticing, but I’m glad he’s still with Kayleigh. I like that she’s almost treating him like a partner, and I’d like to see where that goes.
On the other hand, if you do write about the alternative, I’d really only like it if Taylor knows he’s a person. I’d like to see how she treats him. Anyways, keep up the good writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I'm also interested in exploring the dynamic between the main character and Kayleigh, as this odd arrangement starts to continue into the future. Maybe one day they'll be more than boss and assistant.
As for the eventual bonus with Taylor, I'm still not sure how I want to go about it. Right now, I'm leaning toward keeping her unaware, but that's still up in the air.
Take care!