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Reviewer: araval Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2023 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

nice story

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2019 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

The bigger he is, and the more details can be noticed, the more difficult it is to believe they are both unaware - unless it later turns out Taylor knew that he's not a dummy :)

 

That's the only criticism I can think in an otherwise GREAT story - not sure how I managed not to leave reviews before...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

And that's a fair criticism. I was trying something new with them interacting with him at slightly larger sizes. Let's just assume that they both somehow never realized that he wasn't a dummy :P

I'll keep that in mind though, unless I think it'd be really cool to do something like that again.

Glad you're liking the story!

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