[Report This]Date: December 30 2020 7:51 PM Title: Kimberly's Story, Part I
I love how sweet the interactions are between Kimberly and Mia. The story was well written to show Kimberly's distrust of anyone who can hurt or decieve her. I also love the part of Mia deleting the photo to show she was different. I feel like the patreon advertisement ruined some of the story's momentum, but its fine. Anyways great story!
[Report This]Date: April 20 2020 11:21 PM Title: Kimberly's Story, Part I
Well it's great to see another chapter for this come out, Endless was probably the best story I've ever read on this site and so I can't get enough of it or these alternate endings. The only question I have is, are the chapters with Nicky considered to be a non-canon alternate ending, or a continuation of the story?
Author's Response:
It can be considered a bit of both~ The other Never-Endings all take drastic turns away from the canon story that separate them pretty clearly. With Nicky's story, I like to think this tale of her's would have happened even in the canon version, aside from a few details. Whether Melanie was victorious and remained free or not, Juniper would have wanted to distance herself from the college and gone to Marine one way or another. So, technically, this is definitely non-canon, but it's not too far off from what would have happened to them anyway. Thanks for the review~ I'm happy to hear you've enjoyed these stories so much!
Date: June 25 2019 1:59 AM Title: Kimberly's Story, Part I
As I mentioned before I really do love sweet F/f content so I ate this up. I always felt like Kimberly could have used more attention too, so I am glad you are going this route. The story was cute and well written, and I enjoyed sharing Kimberly's tough emotions with her past abuse and this new person. Mia seems like a sweetheart too. I look forward to continuing this! I am curious who else might get attention. Nicky and Juniper were fucking adorable, I can only hope for some continuation of that.
Only small thing I feel the need to bring up is, as a reader, I did not enjoy the Patreon/Kofi links dropped in the middle of the story. I understand wanting attention to them, but I almost put the story down because it took me so out of the experience.
Looking forward to what comes next.
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this content! It is quite a change of pace for how Endless played out. Gentle interactions are fun as well~ It might take some time before the conclusion to her story comes out, but it's great to know that this story is enjoyed so far!
Nicky and Juniper, ah. I'm glad you liked them as well! I'll try to come up with a Never-Ending for them as well, they seemed quite popular and hey, I loved them too!
I understand your issue with the patreon links. I do want my patreon to succeed and get some focus~ but I've taken your input and I'll leave the links at the beginning and ends of the chapters only. I hoped the middle link wouldn't interfere much with the story, but I suppose I was wrong.
Thank you for the review~ The next chapter isn't so gentle, but I do have more plans for other Never-Endings for stories much less focused on anything absurdly rough or mean. I hope you stick around!
[Report This]Date: June 24 2019 7:39 PM Title: Kimberly's Story, Part I
Yes! This was such a great start to the "what ifs" in the world you created. I got chills when I read Paige unknowingly (or uncaringly) crushed Scarlet. Kimberly’s interactions with Mia were super cute. Lots of possibilities from here. I can’t wait to read more from you!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind review~ Stay excited for the next entry! We'll come back to Kimberly later, but next chapter will see Scarlet as the star. Each character will have their stories divided into two parts, so stay tuned on that matter~
[Report This]Date: June 22 2019 12:32 PM Title: Kimberly's Story, Part I
Cute!
Author's Response:
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