Your storytelling is great. How Caleb deals with being falsely accused and how he slowly degenerates as a character due to constant abuse and abandonement is superb and so emotionally twisting. It feels like it is almost like netorare, but without the cheating.

There is just one issue I have with this story and it is after the vore chapter in 5. When Caleb is in recovery talking to Miranda, this is where the logic falls apart abit. Understandably he believes he is unloved since not one persone stood by him, but what makes him feel robotic is how he explains it, and how he forgives everyone "just because". I dont know if its by design, but it ends up feeling like he is forced to forgive just for the plots sake. There is no humanistic stage where he has to deal with anger towards his family and how they mutilated him into something less than human. At first I thought it was going down a route where he was going insane, which would make this conversation and how he is just lifelessly accepting his new situation understandable, but unfortunately that is not the case.

This line of conversation ends up killing the emotion and life his character hed before as the developement hes being forced through feels so lifeless, and sfterwards troughout the rest of the story, he feels like a robot who has one emotion: fear. His character has been forcefully developed into a corner and it feels just as big of a tragedy as what he went through.

All in all and excellent story from the first chapter to the 6.   4/5  stars

Thank you!!!!!! Love this story!

That was unexpectedly intense. What wonderful writing! This is a story that's really affected me, so much so that I was up way too late finishing it. Bravo!

My friend, this was absolutely stunning, you managed to turn the standard tropes on their side as well as show the horror side of the genre with some human feeling characaters who were more than a vessel for base fetishism. Hope to see more from you

My god man this is phenomenal. Very few stories on this site and in general make me feel this level of anticipation for each new chapter. Re-reading previous chapters makes me feel that Rachel and Audrey derserve to feel this guilt and so much more for what they have done, that being said I dont think they can go back to the way that things were before the incident, but Caleb is smart and he has a big heart I dont think this will completely destroy him so I hope that they can all get some closure, and Caleb be recognise as the hero he is. I'll be waiting for the next chapter with baited breath.

ridiculously good, please send more our way 

Loving the plot on this one! I do wonder how the giantesses obtained such technology despite their apparent incompetence at using it, to be totally bamboozled by humans. Perhaps, they (or at least the colonising group) didn't build it?

Usually, cruelty isn't my cup of tea at all. But here it works smoothly because of the larger story and the development of the characters, who aren't just shallow asses.

I wonder, however, how the truth will break out. I guess the true criminal could have hacked into the house cameras - if there is any - and send it for the world to see. It would utterly destroy the Giantesses image of benevolent and wise rulers and qhatter the souls of the two main women of the story. In any case, it seems that the end is nigh and I can't wait to read it.

This is a very good story. We don't have to kid ourselves, most people come here for smut and many stories which try to integrate plot overdo it and become boring. This story has the right balance, just the right amount of complexity and I've genuinely got some investment in the plot.

But I'm still here for the smut, and that is well done and everything is integrated smoothly.