Date: November 02 2019 1:32 PM Title: 1
This story remains one of my favorites. Really would love more story with Abi and Sophia. Whether an epilogue, sequel, or alternative ending... such a great, realistic set-up, just demands more story. In any case, your stories remain top-notch.
[Report This]Date: June 21 2019 6:29 AM Title: 1
Absolutely perfect, I loved it all, especially chapter 8
[Report This]Date: June 21 2019 5:17 AM Title: 1
Okay, now I'm seriosuly hooked!
Date: June 17 2019 4:42 PM Title: 1
Nigma, I apologize about the rating. I just thought it would be funny to see Sophia cry like a winy baby when she loses her friend upon getting found out after the man shrinks to oblivion. She would have serious mental issues when her friend roasts her and makes her consider being nice, scoff that her friend is weak or considers suicide as she couldn’t live with the guilt. But hey that’s just my thoughts and I can’t boss you around, so write the story how you would like it to go out. Btw, I think suicide is awful and didn’t mean to offend anyone.
[Report This]Date: June 17 2019 1:03 PM Title: 1
No offense, but I want abi to catch Sophia Being a b;@&)/ and get punished for what she has been putting the protagonist through. Sophia deserves a nice punch to the nether regions. Would you be happy if you went through something like that? Also, there is too many of these stories where the bad guy doesn’t get punished. Sorry, that’s just my opinion.
Author's Response:
Could have posted your opinion without killing me on the ranking but hey ho, you do you.
And yeah I see your point but that's part of it isn't it? This isn't the MCU, by the nature of these stories the villain is normally going to get away with it in some way or another.
Maybe stick to gentle themed stories, just a thought?