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Reviewer: psychotropic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 22 2019 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm digging the detailed content AND the writing style, but man add some line breaks rather than just being one whole paragraph.



Author's Response: Ah dang, I’ve always be a devil for that. I’ll work on it ASAP 😂😂

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2019 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good start. I'd love to see our protagonist suffer more at the soles of Amy's filthy sneakers. 



Author's Response: Coming right up! ;)

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