[Report This]Date: October 18 2019 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
If this is a slow burn vore story, then I suppose I understand why so few people who begin to read mine have finished! In any case, I thought this was profoundly well-executed. The introduction was adequately stage-setting and didn’t drag, and you spent a tantalizingly thorough amount of time on every subsequent step of the process, from establishing the characters and declaring the plot, to getting him firmly situated beyond the point of no return.
If I had to pick one word to describe this little work, it would be “diabolical.” I really enjoyed it. As someone who’s favorite aspect of g/t is vore while still very much liking the gentle aspect, this story really suited my fancy, and had me simultaneously rooting for the victim to somehow talk his way out of it while also taking satisfaction in the pred getting her way. This story delivers, And it was well-written. I rate it five stars.
Date: June 14 2019 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
This story was great! From start to finish the anticipation was electric and I loved every minute of every word. I know this was a commission but I really hope we get to see more of Julie living out her fantasy elsewhere.
As far as the story goes, the writing was superb, the descripitions amazing. Every detail you presented to the reader was described in a way they could really see and it was fantastic. Thanks for this story! I look forward to reading your stories in the future.