Reviews For A Long Time Coming
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Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2019 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start

Author's Response:

Thanks very much! I've just added a new chapter so I hope you like it

Reviewer: duck12345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2019 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great first part! Big fan of the premise, Aunt Beth will be a treat to see in action. 

In terms of criticising things I'm not the best, nothing really jumps at at me when reading so no problems so far, keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really like your work so that's great to hear. I've just put up a new chapter so I hope it doesn't disappoint.

Reviewer: locutus17 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2019 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good story so far, I'm interested to see where this goes!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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