[Report This]Date: May 16 2019 11:22 PM Title: ACT I: La convocation
Damn. Great story, great chariters and a fantastic and well thoughtout world! What an ending to part three too! I cant wait for the rest! You did a fantastic job of putting doubt into Merohmenee's intentions at the end. Did she kill those men because they tried to hurt her friend or does is she a killer? I love all of this. Cant wait for the other acts!
Author's Response: I'm glad that people appreciate the care in my worldbuilding! Thank you for leaving feedback and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story too!
[Report This]Date: May 12 2019 3:39 PM Title: ACT I: La convocation
Dear Sir/Madam
You have taken a completely different approach to a size related story, one that is focused on worldbuilding and unique storytelling, thus making it feel like a true dark fantasy novel. Each scene, no matter how mundane, is painted meticulously and vividly.
I cannot be the judge of French inserts' correctness, having no eperience with the language whatsoever, but the English part seems really well-crafted (though I am by no means an expert, being a non-native speaker).
Overall, The Tragedienne is a quality read and, given the solid foundation laid in the first three chapters, has the makings of a real masterpiece.
Best regards
C
Author's Response: I admit I was a little hesitant to post my story at first, since I conceived of it as a story with giantess elements rather than a giantess story per se - but reading reviews like this give me encouragement! Thank you very much for your kind words and I hope you enjoy the rest of the tale!