Date: June 26 2019 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Begin the experiment
This story needs a continuation so bad! Just two chapters and I feel is the best thing involving feet/footwear I've ever read.
Date: April 20 2019 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Begin the experiment
Really great story. It moves at a nice pace and the story line is exciting. I can't wait to read more.
My only criticism, not to be nit picky, are the spelling errors. For instance "but the volatile molecules that contribute to the foot odor collecting in the chamber are 'now' able to pass..." rather than what I think you may have meant "...are 'not' able to pass..." which completely changes what is happening.
Otherwise top notch writing.
Date: April 19 2019 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: Begin the experiment
Great story so far! I can't wait for the conclusion. I hope he didn't sign anything that might make his new position in life perminant ;)
Date: April 18 2019 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: Begin the experiment
omg its amazing! please keep going with it your detail is so lifelike i cant wait to read more