Date: April 21 2019 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Like the story until this chapter, Laura getting pissed her lover for helping her Climax, wonder if he did let her know she was shrinking would he be punished then as well. actuall painful Spanking didn't help the chapter in view at all. If I was to rate the chapter this chapter I would give it a 2.5, however since the other three have been very good and your other work has been excellant, I will give it a pass and hope that we don't revist Laura possibly causing serious harm to her lover (he's got to be all of what 3 feet at most and she at 8 foot is putting effort in to hurting him NOT COOL!)
Agree to disagree. Thank you for the feedback though.
Date: April 14 2019 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
I like the premise of someone shrinking just because they WANT to. And being able to take pills to do it, well I can think of all sorts of games that lovers -- and enemies -- coud play. I'll think be going to drug store real soon to get some 'Aspirn' and 'Baby Aspirin' . ;)
I admit that I was taken by surprise in the last chapter when Laura shrunk but she seems to have made up for it now. And now that she's big I can only wonder what punishment she's going to dish out. I'd also like to find out what would happen if the relative sizes were the other way around?
Author's Response: I think those are some pretty insightful questions and observations. Those are things I want readers to be thinking about, so itís gratifying to hear. I wonder if Laura shrinking put some people off? Itís all a chocolate-and-peanut-butter situation for me, but I could see not everyone feeling that way. Just curious, I noticed you rated this one 4.5 stars. Can you think of anything that couldíve been different in the story that wouldíve made you want to rate it a 5?