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Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2019 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Captain/The Fight

Great chapter. Your descriptions for both the battle and Gesila losing control and gobbling down the monster were both on point. I was clearly able to form a picture in my mind. Sucks that she doesnt get to have much human interaction. Thats only gonna cause her to potentially go AWOL at some point.

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