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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2019 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 20

I'm curious what Rebecca does with this going forward or if there is another turn coming we don't expect but I have a strange feeling of.

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2019 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is one of the best, well paced stories around. Well done! Keep it up!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2019 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 19

Ash is a game changer, I am curious to see her impact on Amanda but the other tinies as well.

Reviewer: Megagiant5280 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2019 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wow! This chapter was marvelous. At least to me, the chapters with her at work humanized Amanda. She seems normal to the outside world but is a goddess to her pets. Truly amazing and well done on your part. 

 

As for Ashleigh, this chapter to me could mean one of three things.

1) Take her actions as her real motive. She is turned on by Tiffany being a shrinkee and her Amanda will get together and play with the shrinkees.

2) She is going to use Amanda to steal Tiffany so she can do whatever she wants to her shrunken friend.

3) She is going to use Amanda to steal Tiffany so she can take care of her because even though she's a shrinkee, she actually cares about her.

 

I highly doubt it's three so I can't wait to see which one of the two it is.

Reviewer: Doormattian Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2019 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 16

Thanks for keeping up with this every Friday. This chapter was my favorite so far. So many scenerios!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2019 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

Poor Tiff, kind of hard not to root for her even if she is getting karmatic justice.

 

Also hope we see Gabi again at some point.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2019 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE THIS GOES!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2019 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 16

Tiffany seems to be falling deeper down the rabbit hole with each passing day, the flashbacks are always interesting seeing how far she's come in her karmatic journey.

 

Nice play bringing back Ash as well.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2019 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Every chapter amazing

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2019 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

It seems Tiff has finally lost that small tedius grip on sanity she was clinging to.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2019 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 14

Poor Tiff, but perhaps this is karma punishing her for past misdeeds towards her fellow shrinkees.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2019 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

The plight of tiffany is quite an interesting one and now Rebecca seems to be all up in her grill.

 

 

Reviewer: Lost Soul Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2019 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

You have another storey line already in place here. You can go a whole nother direction with Gabbi and her snatching shrunken people to sell and use.  Love to read that.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2019 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 12

Poor little Rebecca.

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Date: May 17 2019 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

Excellent stuff, you really feel for Tiffany after her ordeal which is quality stuff given how much of a monster she was prior.

Reviewer: methodman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2019 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

The immunity series is excellent,  I like the flashbacks sprinkled thorughout the chapters.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2019 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 10

I'd love if Tiffany contacted Ashleigh and became her pet. Seems fun! Also would love to see some footplay with bare feet! Great writing!

Reviewer: fatal15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2019 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really love to hear about the flashbacks Tiffany has when she remembers how bad she herself uses the tinies.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2019 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

This is a bold strategy Cotton, let's see if it pays off.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2019 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 9

A little late but Amanda is turning into quite the Hugo Strange if you will.

 

Curious to see if we get any backstory on George/Becca and how they came to be so compliant.

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