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Reviewer: methodman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2019 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

The immunity series is excellent,  I like the flashbacks sprinkled thorughout the chapters.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2019 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 6

Holy christ that was beautifully crafted with the memories syncing up with her current situation.

 

She really was a monster so the turn of events makes it easy not to root for her.

 

Also dear god the way you described Ashleigh and the shrunken woman's ultimate fate really makes me want to see it played out.

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