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Reviewer: tinykev Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2019 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

That was hot when Jane was talking to the giant during oral sex!!!  Hope the next chapter is soon!

Reviewer: chip Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2019 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome chapter! God I can't wait for more! I should have clarified on my last comment, don't change how you're writing it!! I love this concept and the way in which you're writing it! What I meant was, even with concept of not doing back story, this story line offers so many avenues without it! Love it man! 

Reviewer: SuperD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2019 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

Another masterpiece of a chapter. Jane is such a wonderful character, domineering without being mean spirited and her admiration of Elizabeth and generous nature to Lindsey is awesome and of course this chapter was so sexy and sweet. I loved it! 

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2019 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

Are any other characters going to be under 18? I'd rather not read media like this if so, nothing personal, its my own personal thing, I get nervous otherwise.

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2019 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

If this is what you call writing for shits and giggles, then you are one damn good author. Don't sell yourself short, or maybe, judging by this fetish, I guess you are into that sort of thing Haha.

Reviewer: 32mph Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2019 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

One of my favourite tropes about this genre is the gigantic and powerful girl who is ironically very submissive. Just amplifies the cuteness even more! Please keep doing what you’re doing, it’s headed in a good direction.

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2019 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

I appreciate the heads up. I've lost track of how much media I've come across where everything seems cool until the last second, and then the giantess randomly turns evil and kills the guy(s), (granted, its more common in videos than stories, but it still happens.) I can't understate how nice it is that you credit give crystal clear full disclosure, not all macrophilia content creators do that. So you have my thanks for that.

 



Author's Response:

No problem. I don't want to set expectations too high. I'm writing this for shits and giggles. Plus I want to practice writing kinky things in a way that's not strictly the norm. If you want a story with effort behind it, I'm working on the next chapter of Alright I'll Go With This. Hopefully that'll be out in a week or two

Reviewer: chip Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2019 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Jesus Christ that was good! I love the idea behind this story! It's so different from all the other stories and plot lines you usually find and that's fantastic! This story and plot line could be expanded upon so much more so I hope you decide to add more to it! Thanks for sharing 



Author's Response:

I apprecaite the comment, man. Unfortunately I don't really have much of a plan behind this story. Usually when I write giantess stories, I prioritize plot and characters over kink and fetish material. This time I wanted to do the opposite. All kink, and zero plot. I'll definitely be adding more chapters, but don't expect it to get deep or profound. If you like actual good stories then I highly recommend you checking out some of my other stuff. To Defy Gods is probably the best thing I've done, and A New Perspective I think has a good balance between fetish and good story.

Even if you don't, thank you for checking out this one.

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2019 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm not usually into Dom/sub stuff myself,but this was sweet. Its nice to know that everything is consensual. like roleplaying in a bedroom. I like the idea that just because rich people have servants/employees that they aren't assholes to them, but thats just me.

I'm interested to see how this plays out, hopefully it won't devolve into the family demeaning Elizabeth or others outside of roleplay. I like the idea of the family getting kinky with Elizabeth, like "who is really the boss?" but everything stays consensual and respectful. 



Author's Response:

Nice to hear from you again, my friend. Now, I want to warn you, this situation is only consensual between Elizabeth and the family she works for. If anyone else gets caught in the crosshairs (and expect that they will), they will be used. The Pennbrooks aren't really bad people, but they're definitely NOT good people either.

Also, unlike my other stories, this really isn't written with a plot in mind. I just really wanted to write something that's opposite to what I usually write. All kink, and zero plot. So, I'm sorry to say this, but it will devolve into other people outside of the family being demeaned. That'll probably be the next chapter or so, in fact. That's just what I have in mind for things. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2019 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Every time I get an email saying you've made a new story or updated, I know is all right in the world. I love it, the idea of subservient giantess is so sexy here. 

I've thought about a type of giantess, where she's "subservient" in that she feels a need to impress or win over her man. She'll listen to him, but she's only doing it because she likes him but at any moment she could lose interest and step on him, or even kill him if he hurts her. She'd kill for him but only as long as it benefits her. She lets him be on top but in truth she holds all the cards and as long as everyone knows who really wears the pants, she's keen to keep the facade up. 



Author's Response:

Thank you Nostory, I'm always happy when I receive a comment from you, my friend. Yeah this is a scenario that I haven't ever seen before on this site, a submissive giantess. Your version of a subservient giantess interests me. If you wrote about that then I'd read it easily. Send me an update if you decide to do so.

Reviewer: SuperD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2019 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a phenomenal first chapter which does a wonderful job at building up the world and the adorable submissive giantess who is more than happy to serve her more dominant kinky employer families awesome fantasies. Keep up the great work! 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I don't know how much of the world will be built up with this. This is really all just because I wanted to write a story that was all kink, no story. Sort of opposite to what I usually do

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