Date: February 23 2019 4:31 PM Title: The Tedium of Being a Sex Toy
Wonderful to see you posting again. If you want to create some images for this story, the offer is still there for you. It's an interesting take on the more traditional torture story and it's quite exciting to read.
I would never stop you. In fact, I would be flattered. But I really don't, and can't put the time into this to be an active participant.
Date: February 21 2019 3:57 AM Title: The Unwitting Second Actor
Holy shit, yes. I've been waiting for a story like this, and you checked every box. This was amazing! Thank you.
Thanks a lot! I don't know what boxes you're checking, but I hope I'll meet them as the story progresses.
Date: February 06 2019 2:52 PM Title: The Unwitting Second Actor
Wow. This story is hot! I love how aggressive she is and how descriptive you are with Renee masturbating with him.
I think one of the best moments, or what stood out was when she said “You’re going to be in there for a long time.” For some reason, that was extremely sexy. I think it was because I actually believed her. She probably would leave him there. And that’s hot.
The action is no doubt very erotic and it’s what makes this story stand out among others. I love it.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
I really appreciate it.
I'll try to keep it action-focused, but I admit that the temptation to let a plot sneak in is very strong.
Date: February 05 2019 4:21 PM Title: A New Beginning
I'm wondering if Renee should be spelled "Renée" (French spelling because it's a French name) or Rennæ. "æ" for such words with an "a" before the "e", like encyclopedia and archaeology. I guess it's fine as you spelled it. No other comments about spelling or grammar as far as I'm concerned.
This is a curious story. I hope Renee's character will be explored more. What are her motivs? I love the mystery surrounding Renee. I think I'll grow to love this story, assuming you nuture it.
It should absolutely be spelled with the accent, should the character be authentic. However, it is set in the US, and few Americans care to preserve the ethnic authenticiy of their names in the face of the unyielding demands of demographic paperwork. Renee is pronounced 'Renée,' but the weight of American administration has reduced it to 'Renee.'
Date: February 03 2019 10:19 PM Title: The Unwitting Second Actor
Wow, thank you! So rare to find stories where the tiny is a sex toy and written so well. That was awesome. Looking forward to seeing where this goes and just how durable he is, another nice touch, love durability, so much fun to be had with that.
I appreciate the compliment!
I figured, since I have two unfinished stories still going, why not start a third one? I don't like explicit violence, so I like to keep my shrunken characters alive. Impossible durability is the easy way to do that.