Date: March 26 2019 11:23 AM Title: The Beginning
Following every update. Love this story :) !
Would love to see some foot related content now that she is bigger. And also since you have described lot of her bodily functions (like burping and stuff) could you add some sneezing ? An arrogant, not well manered girl like her sneezing giganticly all over the place... would be funny I think :D
Author's Response:
I'll see what I can do. I like how intense mundane actions are from a giant girl, and want to be able to get that across.
Date: March 25 2019 2:47 AM Title: The Beginning
Really loving the pacing. Most stories, at least to my taste rush things too much. This is going just the right speed. Keep it up, good stuff.
Author's Response:
I hope to be able to get across the feel of a girl slowly, inexorably growing. I think that's more exciting that exploding to a hundred feet. I'm glad you like the story!
[Report This]Date: March 23 2019 8:05 AM Title: The Beginning
Been meaning to post a review for a while, but never got around to it. One thing I really like is how believable you made Ruley to be. Despite how domineering she acts due to her size, she acts unstable and downright vulnerable in numerous cases. It feels right considering how a teenager does not have a full grasp on how the world truly works. They can act like they know, but there will be a point where they're lost and feel afraid.
Best thing of all is that she genuinely cares about Tommy. She could easily discard him for another crowd, but she's adamant on being with him forever. It's heartwarming to see that she didn't forget who was with her in her darkest times. Her methods may be... questionable, but she has good intentions for him.
Super happy this gets updated super frequently and with quality too. Can't wait for future updates!
Author's Response:
Riley has good intentions for Tommy! We're going to see how she handles her new perspective, especially as it's constantly changing!
I figure that I kind of just jumped into it a little. I want to try to make a little bit of a nuanced growth story in this case. I'm glad that you're looking forward to more updates!
Date: February 27 2019 10:30 PM Title: The Beginning
Really enjoying the story! Out of curiosity, how big will Riley become? Even if it's a secret, can you give a range? Hoping for over 250 feet, but the rate of her growth spurts would need to pick up to hit that. Also hoping for footplay at that size. Great work!
Author's Response:
I'm planning on her getting quite big yet! There's a lot left in store for Riley. I'm not going to specifiy what range except that it will be very, very big.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2019 7:24 AM Title: The Beginning
Oh, what a find! Massive growth spurts on puberty, my favorite kind of story. I liked Riley, especially because she is eager to grow more. Over confidence at such age is a plus.
Thank you for the first chapter.
Author's Response:
She's definitely confident, to say the least. We'll see how that confidence changes as she grows bigger!
Date: February 03 2019 10:37 AM Title: The Beginning
Great concept, looking good so far.
I hope this gets finished.
Author's Response:
I haven't done great at finishing my stories, although I want to go back to conclude the Small Sisters some time.
Date: January 27 2019 6:47 PM Title: The Beginning
Nicely written so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Let me know if there's anything you want to see out of it. I was thinking of doing a lot. of the story from Riley's point of view as well!