Date: September 11 2019 9:44 PM Title: Redux Chapter 13 - Devour
Finally Heather comes out on top. Thank you. I hope you've come up with some powers for Heather to have since she's eaten so many people. And she's not even done with the mission yet.
My ranking for who comes out in what place is:
1. Ben - He's still a normal man, but gets the important things. He gets his girlfriend back and she's become even more of a goddess
2. Heather - She's eaten thousands of people, so she should have all of Jason's powers and many more
3. AJ and her tiny - She was right. Jason was holding Heather back. That counts for something
4. The world - Heather is its new goddess
5. Jason - Its the box for him. Or Heather can remove his power to grow. Or eat him
Author's Response:
I wonder how Ben would rank himself right now, given that his life is sort of wrecked. Maybe Heather will cheer him up soon.
Date: September 11 2019 3:15 PM Title: Redux Chapter 13 - Devour
Holy. Fucking. Shit. YES!
Today was the first good day in weeks and to come home and find this story to have been updated is... A Heather sized cherry on top!
And for your poll, I hope this cherry becomes the size of a planet!
The scenarios with which Heather hid her true intentions were magnificent, besides the idea to have her need to hide them in the first place. Never seen that before in any other story, so once again, simply brilliant!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I know she's a fictional character and all, but oddly that chapter really made me proud of her.
Date: September 11 2019 8:53 AM Title: Redux Chapter 13 - Devour
I have goosebumps, anxiously waiting to see how this finally continues! And I also love Heather's imagination, particularly the snow globe one if only because due to my own interests I imagined a shrunken city in there along with her. But most of all, it's good to finally, FINALLY see heather come out over Jason. I get the feeling that this is where the alternate endings will branch, so naturally there will be one where he turns the tables almost immediately, but as an alternate ending I wouldn't mind that.
As for your "Poll", of course I'd choose Heather, assuming A.J. isn't in there too~
Author's Response:
I'd really like to do alternate endings, but of course, no promises. I know where it would branch, but I won't comment on that until we're done with the main story.
This chapter was a lot of fun to write. Glad you enjoyed!