Date: July 23 2019 7:06 PM Title: Redux Chapter 7 - Victory
I think it would be cool if Heather had something Jason lacked to be an equalizer. Maybe she actually held back on her growth due to feeling torn between Ben and Jason and 1.7 miles is the tip of her iceberg. Maybe she can steal growth potential from people who haven't undergone the process and it adds up. Or AJ could butt in with her own augmentation or stealing ben and piss off Heather leading to a massive increase in Heather's growth potential.
Jason may always be the bigger man, but a big man needs a much much bigger woman. ;)
Author's Response:
I really don't want to say anything, and that's saying too much.
Date: July 22 2019 3:50 PM Title: Redux Chapter 7 - Victory
So I'm noticing the trend that this alternate universe seems to be more Jason centric than the more balanced first one. He was Ben's first size experience, he's had the focus in the vast majority of the chapters and not only has he stolen the thunder from Heather every time she gets to do something, either by outgrowing her or shrinking her, but this chapter reveals that he has an exponentially higher title drop than her AND can apparently shrink her while their the same size when she claimed they couldn't before.
It's not that I'm mad since male giant fans need some love too and the reviews make it clear that the Jason fans are ecstatic, but if this is the route you are taking it I think you should have made that clearer in the beginning. It's a bit of a letdown when I get excited to see an update only to see it's still the wrong fuel to get my engine running.
I'll keep reading in case I'm wrong since the first version is one of my favorite stories and I'm hoping you'll rebalance things later with more female content (without Jason butting in again XD) That said, keep up the good work, I am enjoying the bit of world building you're doing now that the size project Is public knowledge and here's hoping for more Heather and A.J. in the future.
Author's Response:
Hang in there ;)
Date: July 22 2019 1:49 PM Title: Redux Chapter 7 - Victory
Amazing as always.
PS. I selfishly hope we get multiple endings again cause a I really wanna see unmatched goddess of the universe Heather again. An extended giant AJ would be also be amazing.
Author's Response:
I want the same :)
[Report This]Date: July 22 2019 11:53 AM Title: Redux Chapter 7 - Victory
Oh boy Bens in for it now. Jason's about to celebrate! Gotta say wasn't expecting him shrinking down heather too. Fantástic chapter looking forward to what happens next!
Author's Response:
He really likes control. I have some Big Heather chapters planned in the near future too.
Thanks for the review