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Reviewer: Mr_M Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2019 11:13 AM Title: Redux Chapter 2 - Dinner

Welp, them being able to manipulate the size of others is an interesting development, this will open up a lot of possibilities for the future. I'm personally this chapter was more Jason focused and it seems the next one will follow suite, but that's just a conflict of my own interests and I'm sure many others enjoy reading of him. I'm excited to see A.J. back ack as I loved her in the "other timeline" and hope she gets a little more focus in the future. As always, keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Yep. May want to breeze through the next chapter. Like, real fast, haha. Don't worry. Heather gets her big time real soon. Ben's a lot more arrogant and probably less likable as a consequence in this iteration, but I feel it propels the story in interesting directions. And I like AJ. I'd like to see her get her own big time this go around.

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