Date: September 11 2019 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Just wanted to drop in and say this might be the best fetish story I have ever read. I can't quite put it into words, but the way you write and how you develop the story is just incredible. Thanks for all the time and effort you've put into it!
Oh, and for your informal poll, I'd love to see Jason truly become a god, and make some more use of those perfect feet of his ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for that super high praise. I think there are immensely talented (and far superior) writers here and elsewhere, who undoubtedly put a lot more effort into their work than I do. But I'm glad this story hit the right nerve with you. Enjoy!
Date: August 16 2019 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Since you took the time to respond in detail I should say thank you. All of that extra detail really helps to understand the inner workings behind all that goes on here. Just learning Heather is supposed to be vegetarian helps to shed new light on why she does or doesn't do things. As for everything else, seems like you have it planned in detail, so I have nothing to worry about.
That said, good to hear everything is going well in your life, but it seems that this "personal reason" has put a serious time table on how long you can write. While I'm deeply sad that this story is wrapping up in the next week or so, I must say I'm devestated to learn you might not be writing anything else afterwards. However, I'm sure you have your reasons and I'm just happy you gave us this awesome story to begin with. Plus, you DO have a habit of updating stupidly frequently so with luck this next week or so will still give us plenty of chapters to enjoy.
Date: August 14 2019 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Amazing chapter! Thrilled to see much more of psycho Heather being mad with power! Hope to see her gain even more of it. Maybe something like a new procedure scientists came recently up with that can vastly increase someone's growth potential. And SADLY, it seems to only work on females ;D. Of course, this is just me speculating! (And dreaming)
Hope to see many more chapters of you!
Date: August 09 2019 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Made an account purely to leave this review. This series is amazing, I find myself constantly checking to see if the next chapter is up. I love how well you capture the conflict between the protagonist's desires and sheer fear of how powerless he is. The new chapters are soo good too, love the new giant couple/cuck scenario and can't wait to read more and see just how much fun they can have with their size changing abilities (especially their ability to control others).
Great work!
Author's Response:
Cool! I hope to have some more chapters dropped this week. Possibly even today. Stay tuned!
Date: July 23 2019 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Fantastic new addition. Hope they will get even more special abilities like the pheromones.
Author's Response:
No comment :)
[Report This]Date: July 21 2019 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Another excellent chapter.
I can't help but wonder what would happen if Ben said to Heather that it was over between them, because he saw how she clearly was attracted to Jason.
But I know that whatever you'll write will be incredible so I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: June 27 2019 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Hey again I'm the guy who made an account just to give you a review back when you first started the story. just want to say geat work with the new chapter! and the new timeline idea. I had hoped you would do something of the sort since in the original story there was a lot of build up to Heather and Jason growing but we only got a little bit at the end. But now it feels the story is as it was meant to be. excelent work!
Author's Response:
Thank you. You're right, the original story was tilted toward shrinking and not so much growth. I hope to tilt things in the other direction with this new iteration, but certainly expect a bit of both! Enjoy.
Date: May 09 2019 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
This story started in one direction and seemed to veer completely into another but I was enthralled the entire way through, I wish there were more endings to read different interactions between the characters. I look forward to anything and everything you have coming up!
Author's Response:
There was actually supposed to be a fifth ending, titled "The Atheist" thereby completing the circle. But I never wrote it. It wasn't exactly a sexy chapter, mostly just character work. I may return and write it. I feel somewhat obligated since it wrapped up the otherwise minor detail of the story of Ben's watch.
Date: March 01 2019 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
I look forward to more of your writing.
Date: February 24 2019 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Hey, you doin ok? This is an INCREDIBLE story that just seems to have fallen off the map. PLEASE continue!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for checking in. I've been extremely busy. I'll have to get some more chapters written in the coming days. Glad you're enjoying!
Best,
J
Date: February 04 2019 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Love the whole "God" aspect.. please continue this. Heather deserves to be God
[Report This]Date: February 03 2019 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Love where this is going already... Great introduction! ;)
[Report This]Date: January 28 2019 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Yer a wizard, Javert! You’re conjuring up some seriously good shit here. I’m hesitant to make predictions because I don’t want to poison the well so to speak, but I do hope you keep a spotlight on the emotions going forward. That’ll be the linchpin for me in this scenario and with these characters you’ve built, a scenario I’ve imagined countless times by the way. Can’t wait to read more!
Author's Response:
I'll do my best!
Date: January 27 2019 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Really enjoying this, keep up the good work. I love how domineering Heather is, you're doing a great job showing this progression and setting things up. it's so much more satisfying when you see how far they fall.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Glad you're enjoying. :)
[Report This]Date: January 27 2019 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
An excellent story, even if I'm kind of afraid of what it'll turn into, now that Jason has appeared.
I'm a big softy at heart, and I don't want Ben stuck as a dust mite when Jason and Heather e probably ending playing Gods together.
Well, we'll see how it turns out I guess, so keep the good work coming ! :)
Author's Response:
I make no promises, of course. But I do always root for the little guy :)
[Report This]Date: January 25 2019 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
I'm loving the pacing of this story. The intro has me intrigued and these initial chapters have me hooked! Can't wait to see how the story develops!
Author's Response:
Good! Got a lot of plans for this one.
Date: January 24 2019 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Great story idea and cool characters, looking forward to seeing where it goes. Thanks for writing!
[Report This]Date: January 24 2019 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
Love this story so far can't wait to see what you have planned next!
Date: January 23 2019 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
great story!!!
I wanted to make a great potential joke...but someone beat me to it!!!
hope to see more soon!!!
[Report This]Date: January 23 2019 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds
It’s like you scraped this premise straight off my brainpan. Love the characters so far. So looking forward to more of this.