Date: January 24 2019 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 2 – Flashbacks of the Collar, Part 1
Interesting change of pace from where we were at previously. Seems like Shy is used to being large and in charge, going to be fun to see how she makes the adjustments to come. As a minor suggestion, you may wish to indent your dialogue to make for easier reading for some people. That said, I heartily enjoyed this chapter. Thanks!
Author's Response:
She is indeed! I'll probably just add the rest of the flashback to chapter 2 and continue with new stuff in 3.
That's totally a fair piece of advice, thank you for the feedback. I'll poke around with different styles for a bit, but if I recall correctly last time I tried that style it felt too sparse for my preferences. The last time I tried it was ages ago, though perhaps it's worth another look. Thank you for the reveiw!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2019 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Agreement
Gr8 story thank you for writing this god and thanks for the idea for the goddess
If you and your gf need a tiny ( max 1 inch but can be reduced ) pet slave i am here god and goddess
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! We are actually good on tinies at the moment, but thanks for the offer~
[Report This]Date: January 15 2019 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Agreement
I love this story, i mean in few words a complete scene was created and the characters had their own roles.And having lux as the dominant instead of kata or Leblanc gives this story +6. Well now it is +12 xD. Great job i will definetly read every story you post.
Author's Response:
You're too kind, thank you very much! I totally agree; this started out from us thinking that Lux would be really hot as a domme and did smut from there, and then she just kinda grew into it. I appreciate the confidence and I hope you enjoy the chapters that are to come!
[Report This]Date: January 14 2019 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Agreement
As a fan of League, I've always been disappointed by the dearth of quality content for it so thank you for this most welcome addition! Your Lux is one deliciously powerful dom and she doesn't seem too keen on mercy, poor Shyvana D:
Would love to see this continue or spun out at greater length, I'm especially intrigued by the notion of Akali and Vayne's potential participation, but I understand that this is unlikely and I appreciate this piece nonetheless for it. In any case, I have very much enjoyed this.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for this! I definitely agree, there feels like a whole lot of unexplored potential here. And it's definitely a bit difficult to explain why, but Lux's definitely been pushed past her breaking point here!
I'm currently going back and basically editing the previous roleplaying segments of the initial night that triggered all of this as a flashback chapter, so at the very least that'll be posted within the next week or so. I'd love to flesh this out more, so I'll try and do at least a few more chapters but I really appreciate the kind words! Please look forward to the next chapter.