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Reviewer: LittleBigPlanet Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 07 2023 12:45 PM Title: The Town and The Toys

I love this concept! A fascinating insight into bad parenting and childhood psychopathy. Will you be continuing it in the future? 

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2019 6:23 PM Title: Becca and the Baby

Oh boy, this has quickly become one of my favorite stories on this site. Every update is wonderful and seems to be getting progressively more radical. First the mother only shrunk one person who she perceived to be abusing her daughter, and now she's shrinking whole towns just to entertain her. Can't wait to see how this story escalates in the future. Hopefully the mother doesn't get caught too soon (Or at all)

Reviewer: Lost Soul Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2019 5:11 AM Title: Becca and the Baby

PLease amend your description to include the facts and information that this story involves a "Baby" then continues as the "Child" grows. This way anyone else who finds this kind of material invilvong "CHILDREN" in this way inappropiate they can skip your story. Had I been able to do that I would have never startied reading this story. I understand this is your personal like and that some here enjoy it as you do, so again amend your description so everyone is aware of its contents and can choose weather or not to begin reading.

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2019 4:27 PM Title: Diapers and Daycare

I love this story! I so can’t wait til Sophia becomes a teenager

Reviewer: Loli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2019 4:25 PM Title: Becca and the Baby

Forgot to leave stars, my bad!

Reviewer: Loli Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2019 4:24 PM Title: Becca and the Baby

Please, please, please, please, please continue this! This story is beautiful in every way! I love what you're doing and I love how Kayla protects Sophia by getting rid of problemed individuals. It really shows a great dynamic and I can't wait to see more! I hope you continue to use the smaller scales for the most part but other then that, everything is great! Especially the third chapter. I freaking loved seeing how that played out!

I hope you continue this soon and do more!

 

Also if you ever felt really cruel, it would be fun to see Kayla shrink a whole bunch of people to put them in some kind of toy city or playpen for Sophia to run wild and play with how her mommy taught her to. Just an idea. :D

Reviewer: jessebona Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2019 4:19 PM Title: Becca and the Baby

I know we shouldn't criticize the plot in fetish stories too much but as if the police aren't eventually going to link this to the one person involved in every scenario. But having said that maybe that's where you're planning to take this I don't know.

Reviewer: Englishxshinobi Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2019 12:13 AM Title: Becca and the Baby

I love these stories. Of course, I think the scale in the second chapter makes the guy a bit too big. I hope we get more 3 inch to 2 cm tall people.

Please tell me you plan to continue the story

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2019 1:03 PM Title: Becca and the Baby

Pure evil.

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 13 2019 12:41 AM Title: Becca and the Baby

Wow, this is definitely a fun scenario. It has the defensive, over-powering mother trope. Spoiled child trope. and punishing-the-not-actually-guilty trope. Look forward to seeing where this goes and wouldn't really mind if this was a bunch of cool scenarios of the mother 'protecting' her daughter.

Reviewer: Joker592 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2019 11:03 PM Title: Becca and the Baby

That’s just sick.

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