Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2019 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Falling

As I had predicted, your story is very good. 5 stars indded. Loved how the main characters are clearly craving for each other, but find it hard to admit because of their sizes. Tloche thinks she is too big and groos. Pacho thinks he is too little and not enough for her. Beautiful.

I think jealousy would heat things up. For example: Tloche, to ease her urge, ends up having a one night stand with a co-worker, but it does little to nothing as the experience isn't near as good as the time she she had Pacho inside her. This leads to misunderstands and Pacho being jealous.

Then, we have Tloche other friends. Jablo aside, I think Trano might become a good friend of Pacho and a source of jealousy for Tloche and spice things up. Maybe she will find him on the ground and try to kill him at first, having a change of heart after communicating with him or after he does something unexpectedly good for her.

Well, thats it. I am now a fan of yours and will be waiting for the next chapter. Also added your story to my favorites. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Please, keep up the good work :)